- Significance: 4
- Structure: 3
- Simplicity: 4
- Rehearsal: 3
Total: 14/20
WWW: good background information. Some keywords used such as "demographic", "iconography" and "equilibrium." Good quotes used from reviews and theory embedded (Todorov's) and good use of institutional information.
EBI: made more eye contact with the audience and improve pace as there were many pauses throughout. Also, if the ending was better in terms of having more detail.
Overall, I am confident with my topic as British culture is heavily presented throughout my text. I have found out a lot of background information in terms of institution, however I have to focus more on theory and media representations. This will allow my critical investigation to be detailed.
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